I have been playing SRW OGs a lot lately and I just got this robot a couple of days ago. This robot is so cool imo and its animations in OGs have greatly improved over the ones in Impact.
I don't know if I drew some of the parts correctly as I only had one official artwork as reference.
Also I have seen many different name translations of this robot but according to Japanese wikipedia and the name that appeared in SRW OG2 official book, Rein-Weibritter should be correct.
Nice coloring, but the proportion at hand side not really match with the body. The triple M-Gun Also look like metal stick and abit unstable, abit too small too.
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No Problem ~, just a suggestion. Hope you dont mind on it I can see you use alot of effort on it, keep it up.
You play SRWOG ps2 too? Is very greeat game in this year
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No I don't mind, any suggestion is welcome as long as I can make the picture look better.
Yeah I do play OG on PS2. Actually I have already played OG1 and 2 on GBA but playing them again with much better graphics and animations gives a really different experience.
well it's not that bad. just some part sizes. the first thing that comes to me is the left hand. If you look at it, the right hand is bigger. maybe just by a few milimeters but it looked so disturbing.
next is the body. I have a feeling that it'll look better if you make the body and the shoulder a bit smaller.
hmm.. the head maybe will look better if you make it smaller. well, now again there's no specific proportion for mecha's since people can make it however they want. But it really just my matter of look "cooler".
next is direction problem. well, dont you think the lower body is kinda weird? try to align the direction to the right. especially the center part (umm... the.... "genital protector") it's really not supposed to be that way. it should be in a center view. but you make it looked like it was banged with something to the left.
next is your composition. I THINK you cut the canvas too deep. zooming out a bit will make it better. or zooming it in, cutting more, either will work i think.
well maybe I'm too noisy so I'll stop here. lol sorry for the late reply though. been busy these days.
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You play SRWOG ps2 too? Is very greeat game in this year
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Yeah I do play OG on PS2. Actually I have already played OG1 and 2 on GBA but playing them again with much better graphics and animations gives a really different experience.
Can't wait for OG Gaiden.
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next is the body. I have a feeling that it'll look better if you make the body and the shoulder a bit smaller.
hmm.. the head maybe will look better if you make it smaller. well, now again there's no specific proportion for mecha's since people can make it however they want. But it really just my matter of look "cooler".
next is direction problem. well, dont you think the lower body is kinda weird? try to align the direction to the right. especially the center part (umm... the.... "genital protector") it's really not supposed to be that way. it should be in a center view. but you make it looked like it was banged with something to the left.
next is your composition. I THINK you cut the canvas too deep. zooming out a bit will make it better. or zooming it in, cutting more, either will work i think.
well maybe I'm too noisy so I'll stop here. lol sorry for the late reply though. been busy these days.
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